Smile Poem by Sandhya S.N

Smile

Rating: 5.0


I use to wear it so simply
The radiant armor, my pretty smile
One can see me as warrior
While I wear it brilliantly

I sometimes may conquer hearts
Consent, console and pardon
And sometimes I dagger hearts
And deflagrate the mind too fast

It won’t hide my glowing face
Nor it veil over my wish
But it hides my lurid look
My weeping eyes and face at times

Yet I stick to show my will
Brave and bold and stronger still
Hence I wear the armor! SMILE!
That glows my eyes and fervent heart


02.04.2009
sandhya

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salu Salu 26 April 2009

smile is the password /entry to open complexities and intricacies. a well tuned verse........rgrds/salu

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Noel Horlanda 26 April 2009

beautiful! wordings were great, truly smile is a dependable shield, smile makes cantankerous men to kowtow, at your service, sir! Excellent...10+

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Thomas Coltrin 25 April 2009

dont look at me hha lol =]

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Subroto Chatterjee 25 April 2009

So that what it means when they say that looks can kill....! But seriously, your sentiments echo with everyone's, sometime or the other. But I'd rather that you floor others with your smile. Must be difficult at times, though. Thanks for sharing. Cheers. Subroto

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Indira Babbellapati 25 April 2009

what all one hides behind smile...! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Nikunj Sharma 25 June 2009

Yet I stick to show my will Brave and bold and stronger still Hence I wear the armor! SMILE! That glows my eyes and fervent heart this is simply superb...I invite you to read my poem called SMILES and BOOKMARK...Shall be grateful for your feedback

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C. P. Sharma 25 May 2009

It is smile that cuts so deep Even then man doesn't weep CP

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Muhammad Ali 06 May 2009

It is amazing! a fluid to heart! sore or sweet... but it is!

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premji premji 05 May 2009

sandhya, you wrote this poem with a dagger in the heart... are you going to stab me?

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a fine write on smile...we havemany ofit...friendly...vicious...

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Sandhya S.N

Sandhya S.N

Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
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