Smoking Tom.... [ S H O R T; 'bad' Habits; Dedicated To Tom Billsborough, A Friend On P H, Even Though He I S English! ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Smoking Tom.... [ S H O R T; 'bad' Habits; Dedicated To Tom Billsborough, A Friend On P H, Even Though He I S English! ]

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It's not too unlike a smoking gun,
bringing death with the setting sun.
I don't ever smoke cigar or cigarette,
but my brain may smoke when I am upset.

Perhaps your smoking habit fills a great need,
like your habit of gnoshing smoked meat with greed.
If you cheat in the kitchen and smoke up all the rooms,
it may be better than getting too upset and causing booms.

Saturday, September 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: smoking
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
too busy to write a story now! ! !

bri :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 30 September 2016

It is humorous in tone, but gives a grave warning to all smokers! The best line in the poem is......'my brain may smoke when I am upset.'.........................So very true! ! .

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 30 September 2016

Humorous, funny, well-written.

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Kim Barney 25 September 2016

Did you hear that Tom is going to China? Instead of Smoking Tom, Now you can call him Peking Tom! Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!

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Bri Edwards 24 September 2016

the poem is written as i would speak it to my friend Tom. ;) bri

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