So Cold Poem by Tia Maria

So Cold

Rating: 4.6


What is it about the cold
that makes one feel so very old
It's icy fingers claw their way
tearing all life's warmth away

Like the icy grip of death
trying to steal the last breath
Tis no wonder I feel grey
Damn why is it so cold today

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kris Smith 26 August 2008

Nothing a nice warm smile can't cure 10 Chris

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blue 802 11 July 2008

Nothing cold about your writing, my PB.

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Howard Johnson 11 July 2008

A vivid piece, some what depressing, The choice of words and word flow brings to stage the writers point, A reading pleasure for me, Thank you for sharing, Tia.

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Tsira Goge 11 July 2008

Like the icy grip of death... ................................. Sad but it is perfectly written... 10.. Kindest regards, Tsira

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David Threadgold 11 July 2008

it sums up the way I feel on cold days, a well done (10)

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