So deep, for keeps.
In my mind are several compartments
Dedicated to my commitment
To you, for you
Right compartment is full
Things i need to get for you
To make you happy, make you peppy
Left side is for memories of you
Good times we spent together
In the park, in the dark
Top section is for the future
Things i want to do with you
Our kids, our needs
The bottom is bottomless
Where i keep my love for you
So deep, for keeps.
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Very well organized and original poem, compartmentalized to a beautiful whole!
This is really a beautiful expression so well woven and nicely penned. As i read your poem i was reminded of right and left hemisphere of brain and their functions. Beautiful
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautifully written love poem.