Soaked In Pain Poem by Rini Shibu

Soaked In Pain

Rating: 4.3


Infused with sadness
And hurt to the core
Feel to darken the room
And to lie in bed
No one to intrude into the space
Where you can weep
Soak the pillow with tears
Ventilate all your pain
Till it drains out completely
When the tears dries off
Thats the time you relax
And listen to music and sleep
Then wake up to start a new day
With joy and happiness
As if nothing has happened

Tuesday, September 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness,joy,sad,space
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2017

Ventilating pain and draining tears one can come to relaxation and thus he can get happiness. Beautifully painted. Thanks.

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Rini Shibu 13 September 2017

Thank you so much for your lovely comment..

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M Asim Nehal 26 January 2021

Inspiring poem. Like day followed by night the happiness comes back after pain.5**

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 November 2017

Sadness! ! Hurt to the core! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 12 November 2017

Thanks Edward for reading and commenting.. Rini

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Stephani Kievaughan 23 September 2017

I post here in hope you too read my poems please and thank you very much

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Geetha Jayakumar 23 September 2017

Beautiful poem. Emotions expressed very well from painful tears as well as the freshness of the day. Loved reading it.

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Rini Shibu 23 September 2017

Thanks Geetha, I am glad that you visited this poem

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Bill Cantrell 12 September 2017

Yes, music has helped me vent my tears that I may rest also, so very true, your emotion is the heart of your poetry, keep going strong in your writing, great poem!

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Rini Shibu 13 September 2017

Very true my emotion is my poetry.. Thanks Bill

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