Monday, September 12, 2011

Soft Whisper Comments

Rating: 4.5

I was loney and scared,
Believed that no one cared,
Lost in this big world you see,
And no one ever looking for me,
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Carey York
COMMENTS
Susan Williams 26 October 2014

Yes! I love this poem's simplicity in its word choice and structure. Simplicity is powerful and its beauty is graceful. Excellent writing here. Perhaps the Holy Spirit was whispering in your ear as you put pen to paper here.

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Babatunde Aremu 26 October 2014

What a great poem! The whisper is from God through the Holy spirit. Thank God for still gentle voice. More whispering in Jesus name

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Alem Hailu G/kristos 26 October 2014

What a poem! I liked it very much.It has message and music.I wish we were friends

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 26 October 2014

It is so inspiring and beautiful, has already started kicking inside me. Thanks very much for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 October 2013

Yeah He is always there to take care.Nice drop.Liked it.

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Soumita Sarkar 26 October 2013

Good.............light of Hope can make life new..............I invite you to read my poems.Thanks.

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Gajanan Mishra 26 October 2013

whisper in my ears, good one, thanks.

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Liliana ~el 26 October 2013

Tear-invoking; indeed filled with sorrow and a guardian angel to lift the heaviness to achieve airy peace Absolutely lovely! :)

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Jasbir Chatterjee 26 October 2013

Yes, God is always there for us and we are reminded of this only when hard times come...think of God in good times too, as our Saint Kabir says. Congrats on being poem of the day...

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Lenny Camacho 26 October 2013

so sad and yet beautiful, so hopeful in the end

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Joyce Dilworth 26 October 2012

Liked the poem.Very beautiful.

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Dominic Llewellyn 26 October 2012

great poem. i liked the last stanza, especially the last line When I heard the soft whisper in my ear. nice rhyme scheme

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Mark Dillon 26 October 2012

Nice write Cary, inspiring to read, nicely composed.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 26 October 2012

THIS POEM IS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. I LIKED IT. I LOVE THE TITTLE TOO: SOFT WHISPER.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 26 October 2012

THIS POEM IS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. I LIKED IT. I LOVE THE TITTLE TOO: SOFT WHISPER.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 26 October 2012

THIS POEM IS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. I LIKED IT. I LOVE THE TITTLE TOO: SOFT WHISPER.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 26 October 2012

THIS POEM IS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. I LIKED IT. I LOVE THE TITTLE TOO: SOFT WHISPER.

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Babatunde Aremu 26 October 2012

Only the deep call on the deep. God speaks in small still voice. The only problem is that we sedomly listen. Thank God you heard well when He spoke. Keep getting closer to Him. Good poem. I give 10/10

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Romeo Della Valle 12 September 2011

That soft voice you heard was definitely God looking after you! Well penned and poignant write! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more of your poetic talented writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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