vernal whisper glints in mango grove
leaf sways stooping over jingling tone
melancholy scribbled by ink of mystery
i am yet not stranger by the hiatus feel
sun wishes the grin by the warmth
gleams of light bestirs to green
crawling baby may fall again
never yet loses courage to stand again.
ripple reels through breeze
storm yet shatters hanging nest
bird still sings by lone voices
as room of warmth in the next home......
You have unambiguously articulated in amazing poetic verses what life is all about. When melancholy disappears delight comes in. We make a stand in each stumble we made, and struggle to survive the touch of defying grace. a 10/10
leaves swaying jingling of the mango groves birds singing lush greenery rippling breeze lovely imagery could i have asked for more +++++10 anjali
The message of how life goes on is an important one to learn, and this poem describes it well. it's a great read, you've done well.
Very well written. These helps the reader understand that the world sometimes can be very unkind!
A rhythmic soul searching soliloquy with melting aliterations adding to its beauty. Enjoyed the read.
Indeed it is a meaningful soliloquy to muse over to feel the painful pleasure of life in the human world!
I'm sure young Hamlet would be inspired by your words. Colours, sounds and emotional highs and lows combine with nature to produce a work that transforms the reader. A beautiful piece. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Graceful melancholy, subhendu...10. Tsira