Solitary Moon Poem by Practicing Poetess

Solitary Moon

Rating: 5.0


There seem to be no stars tonight
At least, for now they're out-of-sight
Just the solitary Moon dominates the sky.

The sky is very overcast
So, 'til the gloomy clouds have passed,
The Moon is all that meets the eye.

It's nearly quarter to eleven
The Moon enthroned as Queen of Heaven,
As she smiles at us from on high.

Wednesday, July 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: moon
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Another moon poem.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 27 July 2018

And we are all smiling back after reading this delightful poem. Very beautifully written!

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If you like ships, you may want to read my newest poem, 'Glacier.'

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Thank you, Captain Cur! I am honoured! I believe this is your first time commenting on one of my poems! :)

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 July 2018

Mesmerizing poem, PP! I have enjoyed very much your dashing words. A 10++++++ for the vote.God's Blessings in Abundance.

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But, this poem of you does to me, PP. I have the idea, that I see more than you in your own creation, or is that a humble gesture from you? Perhaps because I am a paintress too? I think here lies the secret of your mesmerizing poem. I am happy too that you have accepted my compliment, PP!

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Thank you, Sylvia Frances! Don't know how such a short, simple poem can be mesmerizing, but I'll happily take the compliment! God bless you, too, always! :)

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Louis Rams 25 July 2018

even thou we're far apart, I see the moon fills your heart- there is no need for the stars tonight. cause your smile brightens up the night

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What a sweet, romantic comment! Thank you! :)

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