Sometimes Poem by lady grace

Sometimes

Rating: 5.0


Sometimes missing you makes me lifeless, makes me forget that I still need air to breath, that I still need the sun, the moon, and the stars

When I looked into the plains, I saw mountains behind; I saw the green fields over the rocky roads, and the streams making their own path

Life is nothing without love, perhaps it’s not true but when I gaze upon the stars, I realized how empty the sky is if even one star, there is none

pain.. Never carry them in our dreams
let them vanish in the shore
let them fade in the midnight
for us to see the new tomorrow..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 04 May 2010

extremely lyric poem, very well writen, lovely to read 10/10/10 Mari

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milady, this is extremely lovely... extremely. :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 April 2010

pain.. Never carry them in our dreams let them vanish in the shore let them fade in the midnight for us to see the new tomorrow......you got to rise for better tomorro...... nice words to hear from oldie.....10

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Rajinder Singh 22 April 2010

pain of loss is great but time is a great healer.Life has to go on, it does not stop. Beautiful poem.10/10

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Eyan Desir 20 April 2010

Nice words there.....Life without is not the end But I guess love is thrilling, adventurous, and a bit dangerous Wow ppl should come and take a little chance... good write Grace

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