Thursday, August 22, 2013

Sometimes I Would Comments

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Sometimes!

I would love to
wake up
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Heather Burns
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Deepak Sawhney 26 August 2013

But alas! Sometimes - the time never comes or is it that before it comes, it is whisked away by destiny? A beautiful write.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 August 2013

Enjoying the moment is the way to live this life. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Lyn Paul 23 August 2013

A beautiful write. I have so many amazing memories of yesterday I sometimes think that these are all that I need.

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David Wood 23 August 2013

I think the same about my late wife. A lovely write.

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Bri Edwards 22 August 2013

and OTHER TIMES? i think i know what you're getting at. days events what happened to the apostrophe? maybe poemhunter absconded with it? it does sometimes i think. i can't decide if you have in the past done, or are just looking forward to doing, these things. thanks for sharing. i liked it. bri

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 22 August 2013

Sweet, it's the little things in life that makes us complete. Love this write. So beautiful...

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Poetheart Morgan 22 August 2013

Oh! Poetess sometimes me too! ! ! ! I think is our poetical vein that speaks loud. Sometimes.....

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Lorraine Colon 22 August 2013

Sounds like a perfect way to pass time. Now you got me dreaming!

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