Sometimes When I'M Dreaming Poem by Linda Ori

Sometimes When I'M Dreaming

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Sometimes when I'm dreaming..........
My world is bright and clear -
I know my heart,
I know my part,
No hesitance or fear;

Sometimes when I'm dreaming..........
I wander through the night -
To distant lands,
I grasp the hands
Of poverty and plight;

Sometimes when I'm dreaming..........
I have the power to cure -
The weak of heart,
Lives torn apart,
My faith is strong and pure;

Sometimes when I'm dreaming..........
The answers come to light -
Which path to take,
Which choice to make,
No question which is right;

Sometimes when I'm dreaming..........
I feel you standing near -
You calm my storm,
Your heart is warm,
Your love for me is clear;

Sometimes when I'm dreaming..........
I just enjoy the view -
I'm in my space,
My perfect place,
That's when I dream of you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lee Degnan 17 December 2006

I love dreaming, but it's hard waking up... Love your thoughts, great poem! Lee

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Alexis Rosas 17 December 2006

i definately envy you're writing. hopefully i can write like that soon: -)

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Dillian Hansen 10 April 2018

I love this poem, the rhythm is great and it has heart.

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jack russell 17 December 2006

This just trips along beautifully...smooth and dreamlike :) jack.

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Debora Short 17 December 2006

Linda, I enjoyed this write. It reaches out with such a beautiful energy, to rightness of heart, and to a world that is so greatly in need of a leading gentle healing voice filled with verb. Blessings, Debora

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I knew those words and dreams and feelings once. You express them finely. t x

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 17 December 2006

Linda...Well crafted work..In particular, the meticuli attention employed on your stanzaic construction...mellifluously smooth.and cosmetically pleasing the eye. ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F. j. R.

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