Somonka - Dreams And Realities Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Somonka - Dreams And Realities

Rating: 5.0


i slept to the dream
on the bed of rose petals.
soul asked ~what I want.
i struggled by turning sides.
my pillow was a bit tight

it rained from my eyes:
making pillow wet, in dreams
suddenly- got up
realise sleep will not give,
i need to remain awake.

Monday, January 7, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,reality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S H 18 February 2019

Interesting poem. You are different from others.

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Darren Jkoeryo 10 January 2019

Wonderful poem, I admire you comparative skills 10/10

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M Asim Nehal 12 January 2019

Thank u so much Darren Jk

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 January 2019

Lovely imagery used in this dreamy poem; and the format is quite intriguing!

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M Asim Nehal 10 January 2019

I am learning to write in some new formats.

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M Asim Nehal 10 January 2019

Thank u so much..... Dear M P

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T Rajan Evol 07 January 2019

Dreams do come when you sleep but to realise you need to be awake.

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M Asim Nehal 10 January 2019

Thank u so much Rajan Ji....

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Prabir Gayen 07 January 2019

In being awake and in your wakefulness the truth is realised...fine poem dear poet

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M Asim Nehal 10 January 2019

Thank u so much Prabir..

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