Sonnet 1 Poem by Ebone' Ingram

Sonnet 1

Rating: 5.0


I can't believe you tried to lead me on
And give me a fake haven for my pain.
Looking back, I see that I was wrong
If I thought you a shelter from my rain.
When I cried, you bade me wipe my tears
And reassured me with Moon-rivaled smiles.
Also you were known to give my fears
Something to fear, protecting all the while.
Alas! You cast my hapless love aside;
A lovelier, quaint maiden took my place.
And now in ashes does my heart abide;
Love ignores me. I don Sorrow's face.
I know now it was too good to be true;
'Twas just a bittersweet dream, me and you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gabriella Franco 30 August 2006

si! bien! si! ! lovely! ! i tend to lean toward these in my own writing. The ending was grand. Absolutely wonderful write! Gabriela

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Jon Lloyd 30 July 2006

The pain of lost love - a timeless subject, beautifully handled. Me gusta mucho! Jon.

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Ebone' Ingram

Ebone' Ingram

Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
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