Yash Shinde

Sonnet Vii- I Carved Your Name On My Heart

My beats ceased
When you left me alone……………………
My heart cried
In a monotonous tone………………………..

Conveying the state
Of my heart to thee…………………….
Come back my soul
Heartily I plea…………………….

I searched for you
In the roses and dews…………………..
I wandered through the gardens of love,
Just for a little clue……………………

And in grief of being separated apart, in my body I plunged your love's dart…………………
And carved your beautiful name in my still heart……………………………….


Copyright © Yash Shinde 2012

Topic(s) of this poem: love hurts

Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 18, 2012
Poem Edited: Monday, March 31, 2014

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  • B. V. DahlenB. V. Dahlen (9/27/2015 2:39:00 PM)

    Beautiful. More More More

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  • Hans VrHans Vr (11/30/2014 6:49:00 AM)

    Superb love poem, moving the reader in a big way.

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  • Tadasha Tripathy (5/30/2014 2:03:00 AM)

    Simply wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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  • Shahzia BatoolShahzia Batool (5/15/2014 3:04:00 PM)

    very good write up...may i suggest something? if you leave thinking about sonnet here, then you can modify the couplet into the triplet,
    And in grief of being separated apart,
    in my body I plunged your love's dart
    And carved your beautiful name in my still heart
    but it's a humble suggestion being the student of poetry myself...

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  • Jessica Hernandezdamian (5/7/2014 8:40:00 PM)

    Lovely poem! It's beautiful! Showing passion. Amazing! (:

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  • Yash ShindeYash Shinde (3/19/2014 1:44:00 PM)

    Thanks everyone for your appreciation and feedback- Yash Shinde

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  • Raihana Abdul JabbarRaihana Abdul Jabbar (10/30/2012 9:07:00 AM)

    Awesome imagination.. Loved the images you created with roses, dews and garden.. :) Lovely!

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  • Guy Lip-more (10/29/2012 4:28:00 PM)

    Loved this, very good write.......

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  • Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (10/27/2012 9:55:00 AM)

    As you have carved 'your name' on your heart, it is sure to bleed for some time and the beats will be louder.
    Let this separation tone your longing and upgrade the thought plank further. If the food of love is suffering, every lover must love on...

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  • Accassa Stokes (10/26/2012 6:19:00 AM)

    Beautiful, I like this one sir :)

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  • Sokal RoySokal Roy (10/26/2012 5:22:00 AM)

    nice poem, Keep it up; and, thanks for sharing it with us.

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  • Sokal RoySokal Roy (10/26/2012 5:22:00 AM)

    nice poem, Keep it up; and, thanks for sharing it with us.

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet SimonHoward The Motivational Poet Simon (10/25/2012 9:29:00 AM)

    Pregnant with a passion that is almost suicidal. Well done my friend!

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (10/25/2012 8:38:00 AM)

    A very nice piece of work. Keep it up; and, thanks for sharing it with us.

    E.K.L.

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  • Diane HineDiane Hine (10/25/2012 5:04:00 AM)

    Intense feeling expressed in this lovely poem.

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  • Harshal JoshiHarshal Joshi (10/25/2012 3:45:00 AM)

    very very bold and romantic revels deep love and pain i like the way it is written.

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  • Dave Walker (10/24/2012 8:16:00 AM)

    A powerful poem, like it, a great write.

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  • Rm. Shanmugam ChettiarRm. Shanmugam Chettiar (10/23/2012 9:45:00 PM)

    the poem has served its purpose. you may change dew to dews. i appreciate your skill and conveying poer.

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  • Bethany M.Bethany M. (10/23/2012 3:24:00 PM)

    This poem is beautiful..... Obviously not the most uplifting poem but so many times it seems that the sad relatable poems are the best. I absolutely love it

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  • Mark DillonMark Dillon (10/23/2012 3:35:00 AM)

    Short, simple and good writing, it coveys the message well, Yash, nice one

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