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Tuesday, April 1, 2014

To Bosom Thee.....I'Ll Rise.....

Rating: 4.9
He was before his beloved,
Kneeling on his thighs……..
His shoulders were down,
With his soulful cries…….

Slid down his cheeks, like shiny pearls,
The tears that his doleful eyes had shed….
Was held in them a vision of his mistress,
Who lied helpless in her cold deathbed….

Bowing his head, lifting hands in plea,
Breaking the silence, quoth he-

____”Once bound with the essence of thee
____I'll wash the coast like a restless sea”
____”Powered by love my heart did bore,
____I’ll trace your impressions on the sandy shore….”

____”Turning stones time does flow,
____a model of valor, should you lie so low? ”
____”your mellow fragrance in the darkness behind,
____tell me my precious, where will I find? ”

She raised her eyes, deep as a sea,
In a soothing voice, quoth she-

____”See the alluring florets of rose that,
____bloom opening their carmine lips, ”
____”With a mellow scent, they invite,
____butterflies to deliver a kiss…..”

____”In blossom of rose you shall see me,
____that blooms with the kiss of thee..”
____”Amongst trodden hopes and dismal cries,
____like the sun of hope I will rise! ”

____”Thus like a rose dwelling
____in the eyes of thee”
____”In curls of petals,
____You shall find me…”

With his blood hitting his veins like an edgy sea,
In a painful voice quoth he-

____”Every blossom does wither with time,
____every Bonnie creation someday declines.”
____”In the withered remnants dispelled behind
____ tell me my love where would I find? ”

Wiping the tears his had shed.
With calmness of a sage, his beloved said-

____”If you wash the shore like a restless sea.
____in spiriting rivers you shall find me..”
____”Which through meandering turns do make their course,
____and cut through boulders to reach their source…”

____”Like a river unifying with salinity of the sea,
____I lose my soul, and ally with thee..”

____”If like a graceful dove you’ll appraise the sky, ____
____like a breeze from the surface, I’ll rise” ____
____”Like a phoenix that rises from ashes to life, ____
____to wipe your tears from dust I’ll rise”____
____”Like an angel that dwells in heavenly paradise, ____
____to empower the oceanic tides, like moon I’ll rise”____
____”In my portrait I’ll live that dwells in your eyne,
____Like a fragrance that scents I’ll rise” ____

- - -”Search me not the remnants behind,
- - -But in the stillness of your soul, me you’ll find”
- - -Mortals do vanish, true love never dies…
- - -To bosom thee, from dead I’ll rise….

______________________

The pearls slid smoothly over his facial curls,
And wet the still heart that bore his name…
The silent heart of a sacred soul,
Dipped in the bloody tears, pious it became……



Copyright © Yash Shinde 2014
Yash Shinde
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Its a narrative poem, that narrates the story of a man who is before her mistress who is lying in her deathbed, like a restless sea, he asks his beloved, where he shall find another one after she's gone, his beloved beautifully narrates, the nature of love through various examples from nature.....
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COMMENTS
This is one of the best love poems I have ever read! Love it! A ten..
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Khairul Ahsan 23 August 2018
An excellent poem. Loved it.
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Uma Ram 11 May 2015
Too good. Loved reading it son. Blessings...thanks for the beautiful verses
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Kelly Kurt 02 April 2015
A beautiful poem, Yash. Thank you for sharing.
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Geetha Jayakumar 21 June 2014
Fantastic poem Yash. Your poem is filled with many captivating lines..... Mortals do vanish, true love never dies…Very true said. A true masterpiece, I can tell. Flow of poem is smooth and captivating from beginning till end. Just loved reading it.
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Akhtar Jawad 31 May 2014
Imagining a mistress as a restless sea is a nice idea. We cannot conquer death. So we must have something to soothe our sorrowful emotions at the death of A loved one. A lovely poem.
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Tadasha Tripathy 30 May 2014
Awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Dear brother I liked your way of expression. Thanks.
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Lawerence Mize 27 May 2014
Beautifully written poem. Enjoyed it very much.
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Juan Olivarez 26 May 2014
Beautiful poem. Very, very much like the work of the great master Edgar Alan Poe. Indeed a masterpiece. Though one flaw you should correct. One does not kneel on thighs. One kneels on knees. If you can adjust that without compromising your rhyme it will be perfect. Blessings.
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 26 May 2014
Hello poet Yash. This was a very enchanting story and wonderful poem, I did so enjoy. Loyd
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