Sonnet V-Almighty's All Seeing Eyes........... Poem by Yash Shinde

Sonnet V-Almighty's All Seeing Eyes...........

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Hidden behind the curtains of mystery
People live in today's world
Innumerable number of faces they show
But the real face yet to be unfurled

Which lies hidden under the sod of lies
Weaved by a man in his whole life
And yet the sod, not complete
Will continue to grow till he thrives

But, while he trespassed against others,
he forgot the one who lives in the skies
He unfurled his face and a trident he stroked
And no one could hear his mournful cries

So no matter how hard a man tries
Can never, ever hide from almighty's eyes…………..


Copyright © Yash Shinde 2012

Monday, October 15, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: god
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 15 October 2012

A inspirational poem with a great message, perfect write!

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John Brown 15 October 2012

Another good poem Yash. I agree that the almighty sees all. Whatever religion a man chooses to believe in.

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Ramesh Rai 15 October 2012

I agree with Hazel. good write.

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Sarojini Pattayat 15 October 2012

You have painted the real face. a matured poem, philosophical also.

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Neela Nath Das 15 October 2012

Wow! Yash, so nicely you put that idea in it! Really, Almighty is watching all our deeds. We can't escape him.

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 August 2014

A Fabulous write with indepth meaning. People wear a mask thereby hiding their real face to the world. Under cover of mask he may tell lies, cheat others just for his own benefit. But a day will come when his mask will be torn on the final day of judgment of his life. Where justice will be done none other than Almighty, from which no one can escape. Yes, a day will come in everyone's life when one will be judged. Beautiful presentation. I loved it.

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Shahzia Batool 15 May 2014

i'm amazed after seeing the date of the post..The Almighty's living in the skies is an innocent idea...! so true a poem!

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Beautiful poem. no one hides to see God eyes. His the reason we are here and we should thank him ever day we survive. (:

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Yash Shinde 19 March 2014

Thanks everyone for your appreciation and feedback- Yash Shinde

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 March 2014

No one hides from His eyes. Live a meaningful life. Thank you for a nice poem.

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