Mamta Agarwal

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! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Sooop- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! - Poem by Mamta Agarwal

Steaming broccoli soup,
Roasted garlic, chopped green chives;
Slurp, slurp, burp, burp, burp…


Comments about ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Sooop- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! by Mamta Agarwal

  • (5/17/2010 5:27:00 AM)


    You have now reminded me of my tea time...great senryu serving (Report) Reply

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  • Allemagne Roßmann (2/7/2010 11:34:00 PM)


    Steaming broccoli soup
    Spaghetti bolognese smoke
    Eyes on eyes
    Slurp burp usurp yes no no yes
    Ohhhhh! brooch it fell on
    bombs in a brownie brioche bread
    drenched nights in red and white
    hoping to be mish for mash
    Lips smacking on mirror
    20 past 3 and 40 past 8
    Eyes still harping on missiles..............

    Good write and attempt.....
    (Report) Reply

  • (1/27/2010 12:37:00 AM)


    yum...yum.............. (Report) Reply

  • (1/3/2010 9:40:00 PM)


    right from preparation to consumption and digestion in just three lines....delicious (Report) Reply

  • premji premji (12/30/2009 3:54:00 AM)


    add a little bit of my heart too........ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 25, 2009



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