Sorry About It Poem by Crystal Pierce

Sorry About It

Rating: 5.0


I couldn't help but to over hear.
I mean you were standing close to my ear.
My name shouldn't be used in that sentence.
You should've been at a further distance.

My ego is not massive and my depression is real.
And the anxiety is more than just a feel.
Why can't you leave me out of your life?
I'm not your business, I'm not your wife.

You talk about me constantly like I'm a movie star.
But when it comes to talking to me you act bizarre.
Do you have to talk about me like I'm an alien?
Do you even know what kind of condition I am in?

Of course not cause you're to worried talking about me.
That's alright you can't win this victory.
The victory over me crying because of feelings.
Nope it isn't in my dealings.

Sorry about it.

Monday, May 1, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: bullying
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 04 May 2017

i'd type 'overhear'. ;) favorite lines: My ego is not massive and my depression is real. And the anxiety is more than just a feel. Why can't you leave me out of your life? I'm not your business, I'm not your wife...................nice expression and rhyming well, the the third stanza i like very much also. i 'love' .....alien/i am in rhyme! Of course not cause you're to worried talking about me. ......i would use 'cause (added apostrophe) and TOO, not 'to'. ha ha! to MyPoemList. bri :) maybe a showcase someday? bri :)

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 May 2017

Hi Chryssa, Another poem, expressing the angst and agonies, responsive of the pain that inflict upon us. By their un-thoughtful actions and words. The world is harsh on those lie down and suffer. On those Who do not stand up and fight. So, a fighter you have to be. An d always stand up. Upright! Beautifully written. With fantastic rhymes and rhythm. Without causing any disturbance the flow of words. Chryssa, you are quite a talented poet. Should write more and share. All the best.10++

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