Soul Burns..
I smell the smell,
Of my burning soul.
The anonymous spirit,
Whom I know or not,
Tried to electrocute
Me and my serene soul.
With his blue electricity!
On the beach of the
Ocean of tear, I stroll;
The tricky horizon plays
With me the game of
Hide and seek!
Over there, in misty island
I Won't step in ever.
My burnt soul can't
Even breathe a prayer!
After the burning,
When there will be
Ashes only, then
My dead soul will take
New birth as a phoenix
To sing the song of
Innocence, for ever
And ever......
Clever metaphor and effulgent imagescape highlight this depictive, pictorial work...Well Done ~FjR~
Only a poet can smell the smell of his burning soul. The deepest realization of the GITA. Thanks. Tapas, West Bengal, Kolkata
Soul animation.So many emoticons for soul.Soul burns.Also all that burns lead to soul though not everytime soulmate.Soul is observed to be at a stalemate here.Good luck to the soul.
Wonderful poem Nilakshi, I particularly like the lines my dead soul will take new berth as a Phoenix, deep and meaningful.
How beautiful Nita! I just love your soulful expression and the flow of your words, how you can take us with you on a majestic journey to the depth of our being. I love it! Soul on fire.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow...d feelings deep inside moved me so much.. Its really wonderful execution of ur belief's through poems :) loved it