Spaces Between Poem by Fay Slimm
Spaces Between
Let there be spaces
In any togetherness.
Welcome the other's need.
Make room for solo
Times, the self likes exploring
As from inside it feeds.
Things can dominate
And thinking can suffocate
Yearnings for 'timeless'. Still
But peaceful, escape then,
Make entrance into such spaces.
No shadowed tree, we find
Grows big. We take care
Not to plant closely. Often
Then breathe your own air.
Space at times calls silently
And we, following wisely,
Acknowledge a need is there.
You are so right Fay...lack of our own space can suffocate us...well written poem...thank you...Fi 10+++
Fay this excellent both in composition and content. 'Give your hearts, but not into each others keeping. Stand together yet not too near together: For the pillars of the temple stand apart, And the oak tree and the cypress grow not in each others shadow.' (Kahil Gibran) I am keeping yours.
Effectively convincing tone in the following: No shadowed tree, we find Grows big. A good read Fay...
Sober depths explored. I have always liked spaces and been convinced for the need to have them and to ocupy them. Never more than in togetherness when we need them more than ever. Great poem Fay! Hxx
Fay.... No shadowed tree...... lovely thought. Keep well Martin
amazing poem, really well written piece, Leslie was right you are good! ! ! ! please check out my poem, forget your pain and suffering. thanks, awesome poem! ! ! ! !
No shadowed tree, we find Grows big. We take care Not to plant closely. Often Then breathe your own air. the world moves by forces ocean razzles by moon ness green emblazons by grin we do exist as necessity ruffles in space......wonderful write throgh excellence, yet there is luscious glow in space, yet imagery bestirs the ingenuity,10+++, thanks for sharing
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12/19/2025 3:43:04 AM # 1.0.0
Providing chances to spaces sometimes becomes necessary for us for they can actually make us adopt the path of self- -realization. They can also originate thoughts beyond the needs and make us more realistic.If we avail such spaces, they can be so convincing for us that we would surely be self-satisfied and would never be choked up by ourselves....10/10 Warm Regards Sameer