Dr subhendu kar
Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***sparks In Dew ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 4.7
kindness and care redound to swoon
sky in its vastness frilling blue blue
heart spruces up by thrills of white
as red enshrines deep by glow of hope

rigidity in skin loses frigidity of fear
humanity is lost in crowd of cruels
yet love whispers milling through snow
night when remembers grace of silence

heart mellows to croon from heaven
at altar of freshness rejoicing
like a dawn sating in golden spark s in dew
warmth reels through splashing spumes

light cascades on rungs of colors
as joy serenades chilled wall of sky
soul of heaven transcends earth luminous
speckles of newness sobs in iridescence.....
Thursday, June 24, 2010
Marieta Maglas 21 July 2010
Well it's a very unique poem, I like how it's conceived
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Dwi Utami 19 July 2010
wow Dr shubendho great choice.and good tink, write god so nice your poem: thumb: : +: thumb:
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Crystal Bradley 17 July 2010
Your unique yet classical style of writing is absolutely beautiful. The poem just wraps you in warm arms and leaves you floating in a sea of pleasure. Great write. Thanks for sharing.
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Emu Getachew 14 July 2010
This piece is full of movement. Your words are simply delicious. The way you presented this piece reminds me of the beauty that is bestowed in all of us. When humanity stops to care then poetry such as yours will wither and die. Thanks for master-crafting each line to show us the beauty in all of us! Humanity Rocks! ! !
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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 July 2010
rom : Judy Meibach (New York United States; Female; 49) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 7/12/2010 9: 44: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: invitation, The poem Sparks in Dew was really good - I liked your choice of words - your usage of the colors and the descriptions - I was just curious why you started each stanza with a lower case letter.
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David Beckham 12 July 2010
[Rigidity in skin...] Great piece of poetry, its contrast and moving themes makes it totally beautiful. Great poem
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Dr.subhendu Kar 11 July 2010
From : Almedia Knight (Brooklyn United States; Female; 75) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 7/9/2010 8: 20: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Thank you so much for your kind remarks...m comments confirm my appreciation for your work. I will continue to write as long as blood flows warm in my veins...I know you'll do the same for we are poets and our work is tranfused into the veins of those who come after us. Regards Almedia
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Alicia Moore 09 July 2010
Usually people look at wats n front of them but u look everywhere: ]
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Sally Plumb Plumb 09 July 2010
I can imagine the sun in a dewdrop.
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Siva Prasad Peddi 09 July 2010
'...humanity is lost in crowd of cruels yet love whispers milling through snow...' when the mind tunes itself to the thought...actions result in culmination of letters into words........con tinues.......poetry flows.... - Masterpiece Dr.Peddi
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