Spring (Haiku) Poem by Bipasha Dutt

Spring (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


From my debut book "Fleeting Moments: haiku on nature"

pinkish blooms quiver
in spring's light drizzle; green grass
glistens on the ground

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 13 May 2018

Very nice. Spring is my favorite season.

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Bipasha D 14 May 2018

Thank you. Both spring and fall are my favorites.

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Bipasha D 07 February 2019

Thank you for your comment....

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Glen Kappy 07 February 2019

another nice image, nicely observed and vivid, bipasha. something to consider—since it's spring, and we wouldn't expect it to be otherwise, green may be an unnecessary word. -glen

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 May 2018

I love this haiku on Spring! Lovely, lovely!

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Bipasha D 17 May 2018

Thanks Mihaela...

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Kostas Lagos 14 May 2018

Beautiful haiku, nicely penned.

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Bipasha D 14 May 2018

Thanks for your lovely comment Kostas..

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 May 2018

Hi Bipasha, Marvellous haiku. Haiku's special features are that, the first line or two speaks about weather, climate or environment and the third one, relates this statement to human nature, very subtly. This expression of relationship need not be explicit. Your line, : Green grass glistens on the ground: : says it all. That it why I loved it. A 100 to you..

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Bipasha D 14 May 2018

Thank you for such kind words. Truly made my day

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