Spring Springs (Haiku) Poem by Bipasha Dutt

Spring Springs (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


From my debut book "Fleeting Moments: haiku on nature"

fluorescent green leaves
peep out of their covering -
spring springs all around.

Thursday, April 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: spring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 30 April 2018

A great haiku and a wonderful image you have created here!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 April 2018

Brilliant haiku, Bipasha. A great picture of spring, the season that symbolizes life.10

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Mihaela Pirjol 20 April 2018

I like the use of homophone in this well-written haiku!

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Bipasha D 20 April 2018

Thank you Michaela

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 April 2018

Dear Bipasha, such a wonderful haiku👍👍👍

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Bipasha D 20 April 2018

Thank you Bernard...

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 April 2018

Hi Bipasha, An extremely beautiful haiku. The phrase: : fluorescent green: : Gels into the rest of the poem and communicates something sublime to the reader. : : Leaves peeping out of their cover: : is another statement pas excellence. Equally wonderful is the closing line, : : Spring springs all around: : : Fantastic! An ocean of poetry contained in this tiny capsule. A100 plus onto my poems, so that I am reminded to come for a re.

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Bipasha D 20 April 2018

Thank you so much for such a wonderful comment..

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