Rini Shibu

Gold Star - 93,715 Points (1978 / India)

State Of Mind - Poem by Rini Shibu

Purpose and plan is in his mind
Complicated map is in your hand
The way is narrow and door is locked
Where to start and how to end
Puzzles and riddles twisting in mind
Face is blank with a smile

Topic(s) of this poem: hiding, mind


Comments about State Of Mind by Rini Shibu

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (7/9/2018 6:36:00 AM)

    Puzzles and riddles twisting in mind
    Face is blank with a smile........so enchanting. A beautiful poem nicely executed.10
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  • Seamus O Brian (4/23/2018 9:21:00 AM)

    To unlock the mind of another, such a daunting task. I enjoyed how you create your own mystery in the mind of the reader with this one.
    :)
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  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/20/2018 1:50:00 PM)

    Face is blank with a smile
    Yes, such a mind-blowing poem will do it with us.
    Thanks dear Rini for this lovely poem.
    10+++++
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    (4/20/2018 11:15:00 PM)

    Thanks Subhas for your compliments..! !

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  • Deep Paul (4/20/2018 6:08:00 AM)

    Where to start and how to end
    Puzzles and riddles twisting in mind
    Face is blank with a smile.....nice lines...resonates with me. Thanks for sharing.
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    (4/20/2018 11:14:00 PM)

    Thanks Deep Paul..! ! !

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  • (4/20/2018 5:58:00 AM)

    This is a very good poem about state of mind with an air of mystery. (Report)Reply

    (4/20/2018 11:13:00 PM)

    Thanks Lamar for your comment..! !

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  • Carl Roussell (4/20/2018 5:37:00 AM)

    Life is what you make it. Trying not to let the roadblocks get in the way. (Report)Reply

    (4/20/2018 10:33:00 PM)

    Thank you so much Carl Roussel..! !

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  • Robert Murray Smith (4/20/2018 4:56:00 AM)

    Rini, I like your mind poem. We wonder what the plan is. (Report)Reply

    (4/20/2018 10:31:00 PM)

    Thanks Robert for your comment..!

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 20, 2018

Poem Edited: Friday, April 20, 2018


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