Tuesday, June 16, 2009

Stay Clean Comments

Rating: 5.0

Many come in our lives
Some of them catches eye
Some will touch our heart
Some will move our lives
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Antonio Liao 02 March 2010

It’s a HOPE hummer in the shadow, of the soul...I do like to internalized this Poem...beautifully pen...God bless.... a 10+

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Catrina Heart 18 June 2009

Stunning thoughts to share...well written poem..10+++

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Louis Rams 17 June 2009

your mind has to stay clean so that your heart can see, all that was meant to be. a good write a ten

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 June 2009

'So it’s not sunshine Nor it’s a rainbow Life is really mean It makes us to lean But move on staying clean' The whole poem is nice and beautiful. We could learn.10+++

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 June 2009

i know sir......sometimes i feel so bad when i see other people enjoying life....cause for me it s so hard to move on....this is nice poem about the movie of life...most times it is filled with tragedy...wonder whether there are happy endings in life....! ! ! ! nice sir10++ regards shan

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Eyan Desir 17 June 2009

simple but complex 10s...........

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Joseph Poewhit 17 June 2009

Stay on the path---

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 17 June 2009

Very good Kranthi. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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nive message you have enveloped here

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you put across your stand well

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rago rago 16 June 2009

fine and you have penned well.............

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Janell Cressman 16 June 2009

wow, it is an amazing poem! ! ! !

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