Stolen Moments Poem by James B. Earley

beautiful. you too have managed to turn infidelity from a sin to pure love and give it credence.well done.

so true.. I love how you set this up it is nice i like how you typed it makes the reader really understand what they are reading.. great work Krista

I like the fact that you are experimenting with spaces. This is a bit hard to do with PH's limitations.

Beautiful poem - excellent writing. Predecessors wrote so a lot that it was possible only to join them. I will be coming back in order to make oneself acquainted with your artistic work. I like it. Greetings for you :) Maria Barbara Korynt

I think James that with 40 comments already on your poem there is nothing new that I can say except its a fine poem. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

So....long..the day.......so...short..the hour Stolen.....moments....angst.............. deceit beautiful!

I completely relate to this poem and I love the manner in which it was written. Thank you for sharing.

Hey James: In this poem I see so many situations that could be termed in this way. How many young people could equate with the thoughts implied. Well written. Adeline

The stolen moments of an illicit love beautifully expressed.

Yes - I consider the poem to be excellent; the way you have spaced out the words, giving the reader time to thoroughly take in the meaning. Joyce.