Alone.........I sit
By the fishing hole
Didn't bring..don't need
...No fishing pole
Just want to catch
A breath of air
..And reconcile
Distraught..despair
..For in my slumber
Though wide awake
Passion's pride
Fueled my mistake
..And now..so alone am I
By the fishing hole
Didn't bring..don't need
...No fishing pole
Author's note:
.....Just the way life is.........sometimes.....
such a nice way of expressing your emotions. well done. nice flow in the poem.
Yep, I can go with that one. A well written piece. Mine is country walking for hours on end, and then wondering how you got where you were going without any thought. Enjoyed. Thanks for pointing me to it Steve
So true - fishing rod is an excuse for a man to get away to sit and muse. Great piece James Mark
Well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive expressions with conviction. An insightful creation elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, James.
I do enjoy how you write about life - you make it real. This was no exception, as it was written very well. Warmest regards, CJ Heck
James, I think I've been fishing the same way.I often found much peace down by the fishing hole. A though inspiring poem.Well penned. a10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
There's just something about water that's comforting, relaxing, and mind-altering. What better place to contemplate life's choices and consequences? Nicely done, James. Linda :)