Passion's Pride Poem by James B. Earley

Passion's Pride

Rating: 5.0

Alone.........I sit
By the fishing hole
Didn't bring..don't need
...No fishing pole

Just want to catch
A breath of air
..And reconcile

..For in my slumber
Though wide awake
Passion's pride
Fueled my mistake

..And alone am I
By the fishing hole
Didn't bring..don't need
...No fishing pole

Author's note:

.....Just the way life is.........sometimes.....

Linda Ori 31 March 2009

There's just something about water that's comforting, relaxing, and mind-altering. What better place to contemplate life's choices and consequences? Nicely done, James. Linda :)

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Bonnie Collins 28 March 2009

Very enjoyable write filled with alot of serentiy.......

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Seema Chowdhury 27 March 2009

such a nice way of expressing your emotions. well done. nice flow in the poem.

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Stephen Stirk 27 March 2009

Yep, I can go with that one. A well written piece. Mine is country walking for hours on end, and then wondering how you got where you were going without any thought. Enjoyed. Thanks for pointing me to it Steve

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Mark R Slaughter 27 March 2009

So true - fishing rod is an excuse for a man to get away to sit and muse. Great piece James Mark

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Alison mujati 21 April 2020

good reads, May you read my love poem, the blurred figure

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Chinedu Dike 27 July 2019

Well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive expressions with conviction. An insightful creation elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, James.

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Akhtar Jawad 04 April 2018

Touching emotions nicely painted.

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Cj Heck 05 August 2009

I do enjoy how you write about life - you make it real. This was no exception, as it was written very well. Warmest regards, CJ Heck

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Myrtle Thomas 07 April 2009

James, I think I've been fishing the same way.I often found much peace down by the fishing hole. A though inspiring poem.Well penned. a10

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