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Passion's Pride

Rating: 5.0

Alone.........I sit
By the fishing hole
Didn't bring..don't need
...No fishing pole

Just want to catch
A breath of air
..And reconcile
Distraught..despair

..For in my slumber
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Bonnie Collins 28 March 2009

Very enjoyable write filled with alot of serentiy.......

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Seema Chowdhury 27 March 2009

such a nice way of expressing your emotions. well done. nice flow in the poem.

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Linda Ori 31 March 2009

There's just something about water that's comforting, relaxing, and mind-altering. What better place to contemplate life's choices and consequences? Nicely done, James. Linda :)

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Lynda Robson 29 March 2009

A lovely relaxing read James, made better by the pauses in the words, who needs a line, and who needs the fishes lol, 10 Lynda xx

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Tai Chi Italy 29 March 2009

I love the elipses throughout your journey here James! it gives the reader the feelings of the urgency to just catch his breath and assess the outcome of his decisions in life. Passions pride, leaves us nowhere to hide. Thank you for pointing me in this direction. We all need our space, this poem reminds me of an old expression If wishes were fishes We'd all be down the chip shop! Yeah! who needs a pole? Smiling at you Tai

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Alison mujati 21 April 2020

good reads, May you read my love poem, the blurred figure

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Chinedu Dike 27 July 2019

Well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive expressions with conviction. An insightful creation elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, James.

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Akhtar Jawad 04 April 2018

Touching emotions nicely painted.

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Cj Heck 05 August 2009

I do enjoy how you write about life - you make it real. This was no exception, as it was written very well. Warmest regards, CJ Heck

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Myrtle Thomas 07 April 2009

James, I think I've been fishing the same way.I often found much peace down by the fishing hole. A though inspiring poem.Well penned. a10

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