Striving Toward Perfection Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

Striving Toward Perfection

Rating: 4.2


Steady struggle with sin
Becomes big battlefield;
To emerge so victorious,
Preparation must be fulfilled.

Put on the Almighty's armor,
Standing safely with courage;
Defeat the enemy's evil forces
And tricks of this dark age.

Firm faith is your shield,
Stopping the fiery arrows;
They're aimed at you by satan
To bring burning sorrows.

For as long as we live
In this so sick, stubborn world;
Abound in faith, love, and hope,
Be always adamant, not cold.

Reach the ultimate goal -
The promised salvation;
Be holy and blameless,
Striving towards perfection.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 01 November 2020

Loved your earnest call to strive towards perfection. I found the poem very inspiring. 'Firm faith is your shield, Stopping the fiery arrows; They're aimed at you by satan To bring burning sorrows.' - Loved this stanza particularly.

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Avid Fan 01 May 2019

Steady struggle with sin Becomes big battlefield; To emerge so victorious, Preparation must be fulfilled. An uplifting spiritual poem, sir Bernard.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 November 2017

Perfection! ! ! To reach the ultimate goal! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 November 2017

Thanks, Edward....I’m so glad and grateful👍👍👍

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