Stunning Feeling Poem by merna ibrahim

Stunning Feeling

Rating: 5.0


It's a great thing to live in your country in peace and liberty.
It is stunning to feel with freedom and mercy.
Some people suffer from violent and cruel wars,
they die, cry, and for freedom they do implore.
Suddenly, the mother finds her baby a motionless corpse!
because those devilish aggressors fight by force.
Unfortunately, the innocent citizens become dead victims,
their bodies reveal the fierce wars' symptoms.
We must rescue them from this disaster,
and answer their call faster and faster.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazem Al Jaber 10 January 2009

amazing great one full of energy my dear merna.. lets pray for Gaza and its great people..

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Sanjib Das 01 October 2009

WE ARE STUNEED BY YOUR POEM. IT'S A NICE ONE. I GIVE YOU10/10

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Kesav Easwaran 23 September 2009

a stunning feeling well expressed...i admire the humanitarian element in you and in your poem, Merna...good write with a good message therein...10

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Zeinab Sherif 03 September 2009

very well expressed i hope the war is over & the peace spread in the world & a new white un stained page is opened.10+

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Afzal Shauq 10 May 2009

in fact, its an appealing poem.. like it and let me say well done.. afzalshauq@yahoo.com

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VEER the ultimate boy 08 February 2009

really dear the poem shows the feeling of those peoples who suffered from those wars....... thats why i dont like wars always want peace

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