Sun Poem by merna ibrahim

Sun

Rating: 5.0


You are the source of heat and light.
During the morning, the girl flies her kite,
And the flowers sway with delight.
You ignite the whole universe..Yes it's right.

You are the center of our solar system.
You revolve around your axis in a specific system.
Your temperature is so high,
If anyone came nearer to you, he certainly would say to his life Goodbye! !

You are a double edged weapon;
Your heat and light would destroy us,
And also rescue us from the freeze's cuss.
You are a powerful star
And you are from us so far.

You appear with every new dawn
And you give the day a beautiful tone.
You are important to the human, the animal and the plant,
Without you we can't live, Yes we can't! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 28 May 2009

wonderful, excellent and rich enough... merna dear, you did it realy a very perfect way... inspiring poem... good idea and written sweeeeet... hey you are advancing and the each new poem is better then the previous..thanks merna for all of you love and concerns and comments...1000 ++++++++++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 May 2009

A brilliant work with sun. I love this piece.10+++

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Omar Ibrahim 29 May 2009

i took a similar poem at school....the poet also talked about the sun.....but not as wonderful as u.......great one lovely to read......10++

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Kuji Soliman 29 May 2009

i loved this poem, i love the way you express yourself through poetry, keep on we want more! ! ! KUJI! :)

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Eyan Desir 29 May 2009

Good write Thank for telling us about the sun

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Leela Devi 25 November 2010

-you are from us so far-very sensitive line -dear sister poet

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Obinna Eruchie 28 October 2009

With light from the sun, nature's beauty can be viewed at sight.

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Ramin Chaman 30 September 2009

Many thanks for your vote. And I think your poem deseves 10+++

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Blazing with beauty. Keep on growing!

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Menna Gamal 01 June 2009

so sweet and lovely poem, you are right the sun is so beautiful and important.well done and keep writing

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