Sudden Summer Shower.... Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Sudden Summer Shower....

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In sudden summer shower
I Force my toes and feet
In the trailing vapours of light
In the prod and puddles
Like to walk slowly
By not touching the familiar slush
Walk and walk to face
The burning streets turning
The serenity to catch
And smell the first summer rain
I trade my evening walk
To hug myself in peace.

Wednesday, March 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: summer
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Rain in summer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 19 November 2016

When it rains, I trade my evening walk To hug myself in peace. Nothing like staying indoors, with a cup of tea, hugging the beloved.

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Sudden summer shower, well written.

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Rain is mostly loved by all, that too summer rain, a bless, thank you dear

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Ency Bearis 01 April 2016

Nice poem and well presented

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Welcome, for the nice review, thanks dear

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 April 2016

To hug myself in peace. Thanks for sharing.

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Hope all should have their own space in thus materialistic world, happy to receive lovable comments

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Kishore Kumar Das 31 March 2016

sudden summer shower is often pleasant......nice feelings..

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To write, feelings play a crucial role, thanks for the keen observations,

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