Suicide Poem by Sandhya S.N

Suicide

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Is it that as always told?
A foolish choice of his own life! !
Is it as they all have told?
A valiant choice of his own life! !

There are vibrant discussions;
Between them who had steadfast;
They both had committed it! !
One by life and one by death! !

Some had preferred the fine art, life;
And ‘committed’ in graph of life! !
They had their own sight for that;
And went on commit day by day;

Some had preferred to surpass life! !
And challenge the impending destine
And ‘committed’ it with brave heart! !
And pout at life with grimacing face;

Dear, I am still confused! ! !
What shall I prefer in life? ! !
They both argue they are brave;
And imprecate to commit too

I am frightened in the field! !
Where I have to decide at times;
I am scared of battle cries! !
And feel disarmed and dispassionate! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subroto Chatterjee 08 April 2009

Hmmm.....Dark and brooding. Incidentally, check on my poem'Superman'. The world's full of them. And they need help. Cheers. Subroto

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 13 March 2009

I have always felt that living requires more courage than sucide........... Any way good Write

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Salu Salu 11 March 2009

aesthetically defined suicide thru the dialogue -in a monologue - of the brave and coward... cowards die many times in their life but dauntless men never meet it except once...they say.... your intellectual scribbles reminds me 'the gloomy sunday'...movie/song where people in scores embrace death lovingly listening the mesmerized song......... thanks for sharing/salu

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premji premji 09 March 2009

the beauty of suicide............................

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Sandhya S.N

Sandhya S.N

Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
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