poet Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! Sultry Dream! ! !

yet a letter from the heaven
carrying the message of hope of yarning
intuiting the blue universe on the other side
dream yet not bloomed by the craving

rain has expired from the blue sky,
seemingly sultry dry across flames of desire
hanging in the hinges of scarlet void
moon may no fall to the ground elsewhere

no fear of falling like rain
lest may be spoiled by the dust
the earthly embrace intoning blue
rose loses it`s beauty when touched upon

the strength of obsessive illusion ruffles
dream entices upon by the heavenly bliss
mind still drifts in the vale of seamless insinuation
waking me from the sleep under rugged silence

Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 13, 2008
Poem Edited: Monday, May 18, 2009

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  • Michelle Kafka (8/15/2009 6:12:00 PM)

    The blue rose is a beauty for sure and looks to delicate to touch lest it loses its magic. My favourite place is stanza three last two sentences. Thanks for sharing.

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (7/12/2009 3:11:00 PM)

    ''yet a letter from the heaven
    carrying the message of hope of yarning
    intuiting the blue universe ''....
    Color conveys meanings natural associations and psychological symbolism. . Blue triggers associations with the sky and a psychological sense of calm. Especially darker blue, is associated with intelligence, stability and conservatism. Red is the color of fire.. Occurrences of colors in nature are universal and timeless.
    nice symbolic poem.....10++++ from me

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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (5/16/2009 4:18:00 AM)

    unique images and thoughts..a poem which spring from a mind which soar in a poetic universe...a sense of about to fall in sleep felt in this poem while as oft images abide in our mind...strong and contemplating poem...10+++++


    rain has expired from the blue sky,
    seemingly sultry dry across flames of desire
    hanging in the hinges of scarlet void
    moon may no fall to the ground elsewhere

    no fear of falling like rain
    lest may be spoiled by the dust
    the earthly embrace intoning blue
    rose loses it`s beauty when touched upon

    the strength of obsessive illusion
    dream enticed upon by the heavenly bliss
    mind still drift in the vale of seamless insinuation
    waking me from the sleep under rugged silence

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  • Sarah Giuntoli (12/18/2008 10:49:00 PM)

    Wow. I do not believe i have read such a peice on poetry that has caught my eyesthis much in a while. I am amazed at the use of literature that crafts the perfect lymeric.
    Thank you for bringing my sttention to this poem.

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  • Caroline GuedesCaroline Guedes (10/25/2008 10:40:00 PM)

    Loved the wording used. Powerful! Keep up the good work!

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  • Miriam Maia PaduaMiriam Maia Padua (10/5/2008 11:17:00 PM)

    sultry dream.....my kind of poem...my kind of style..i love this...and i guess all your piece are like the others...very great....passionate and touching....

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  • Reya Anya (9/28/2008 7:43:00 PM)

    Really enjoyed the vivid imagery used here.

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  • Sharon Goodwin (9/23/2008 11:47:00 AM)

    Great Poem. Very passionate

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  • Kimberly Kastner (8/27/2008 9:34:00 PM)

    Beautifully written! I especially liked the line about how a rose loses its beauty and starts to die when it's touched.

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  • Paolo Giuseppe MazzarelloPaolo Giuseppe Mazzarello (8/27/2008 1:44:00 PM)

    The natural events reflect the interior feelings. A sultry morning after a rainy night: the poet feels dry, his interior world is dry, in spit of the recent rain. They are warm days.

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  • Taneisha Peterman (8/27/2008 10:52:00 AM)

    outstanding. nicely written. kudos

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  • Ozzy Govea (8/26/2008 3:21:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem! Well written too. Keep writing!

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  • Chelsi Ruffing (8/26/2008 1:49:00 PM)

    I must say you put it into very good words. Well written, keep up the amazing work.

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  • The Long Lost Dreamer of Dreams (8/26/2008 11:56:00 AM)

    I don't quite comprehend the flow, rhythem, or meaning of this poem. i guess i am still too young and inexperienced in poetry to fully grasp the concept of this poem

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  • Ravi SathasivamRavi Sathasivam (8/26/2008 3:38:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. Excellent choice of words
    And very well expressed too.
    I enjoyed reading this poem.
    Ravi

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  • Evaughn GrayEvaughn Gray (8/25/2008 11:33:00 PM)

    wow that was just a deep poem, it was marvelous, great write! ~Hazel G.E

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  • Andrew Greydanus (8/25/2008 9:56:00 PM)

    Great write. I loved the smoothness.

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  • Kefentse SathekgeKefentse Sathekge (8/25/2008 3:50:00 AM)

    good metaphors used. they blend well with your dream

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  • Abdullah Salaam (8/24/2008 3:35:00 PM)

    well...bravo..liked it and enjoyed..keep on rocking

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  • Analisssa Range (8/24/2008 12:40:00 PM)

    Its a wonderfull poem it even feels like a dream when you read it

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