Sun Poem by Crimson Love

Sun

Rating: 4.1


As your sun rotates and gives me a revolution,
I twirl and glide around your heat,
every movement,
lost between this void-less space.
I remember the lips mine longed to meet.
The hands that long to tangle in glistening stars,
to look upon the milky way,
the soft, silken bounty of untouched love.
The out of reach,
my only warmth.....

She is the sun, my personal heat.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bella Hernandez 19 January 2012

Beautiful imagery that makes ur point very clear... splendid poem Crimson ~Bella

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Dave Walker 18 January 2012

A very beautiful poem. A great write.

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Wahab Abdul 12 January 2012

nice poem..thinking poem...theme is very good ..i like the poem...please read my poems

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Kara Towe 11 January 2012

Great write! So vivid. Thank you for sharing :)

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