Sunlight shining on the right, insisting on being seen,
wanting to be written into a poem, showing it's strength
and power through the mind of this mere poet.
Watching it silently sitting just beyond my back, yet
seeing it being spread across the floor and walls, able
to find a way through windows and glass doors, a miracle
in itself, as God would attest to if asked.
An interesting enjoyed the rhythm and flow great job Deseves its place in Bri's Showcase 10 ++++
i'm about to put this in my/our May 2018 showcase, but with a note about It's. bri :)
(continued) ...yes, optics? is an interesting subject, like many. sometimes i am in one room looking out that room's window on the back side of the house, and i 'see' a light in the 'distance', one which is really NOT where it appears to be. the light is actually coming from behind my back, from the house across the street, through a window on the other side of this house, through two open doorways & sneaking around me to appear 'miraculously' 'in the window i am staring at'. (cont.)
(continued) ...i'm pretty sure 'God' would attest to ALL MIRACLES which She felt that She could claim! ! on the other hand, the miracles you and i produce..........well, maybe she'd attest to YOURS, but MINE may be attested to by a LOWER POWER! ! ! i'm trying to a picture you watching the Sun beyond (behind? ?) your back; do you use a mirror? i DO like the poem. to MyPoemList. (to continue) ...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hi, RoseAnn. i have NOT read the poem yet. i laughed when i read the title....with It's, not Its. i thought i'd taught you properly! ! ! ha ha. maybe you should stop listening to AND, AT THE SAME TIME! , tapping to your music while writing and see if it makes a difference! ! ! ! ! ? or should the title be read as [The] Sun Showing It's [[aka it has; not it is]] Strength? ? ? ? hee-hee. ok, well MAYBE that was your idea all along! ? (to continue) ...