Sunk In The Night Poem by Chan Mongol

Sunk In The Night

Rating: 5.0


SUNK IN THE NIGHT
by Chan Mongol
October 15 of 2022


Life was never pleasant for me;
Perhaps, pleasure was never meant to be.
One step forward but ten steps backward;
For 1 thousand, losing 10 thousand is absurd!
One after another harder catastrophe;
Mentally, physically, financially daily!
Day comes after the night which is a natural law;
I am sunk in the night where only dark I swallow!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 18 October 2022

Top score for 'Sunk in the night'

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 18 October 2022

A sad, meaningful poem that ensures beauty of rhythm.Mentally, physically, financially daily!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 15 October 2022

I really enjoy this one It was refreshing Bravo! ! !

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Surely poignant poem. Good rhyme scheme and use of exquisite vocabulary makes it rhythmic too. Enjoyed. Thank You for sharing

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Richard Wlodarski 15 October 2022

Such a heart-rending poem! Written with brilliant succinctness!

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