Sunset Poem by David Wood

Sunset

Rating: 4.9


That glowing orb of yellow daffodil
Darkening from yellow to orange glow
From the west faint embers that thrill
A shimmering breeze that dips below
The horizon like a mirage in a desert of sea.

From the east darkness spreads its dark cloak
As night creeps slowly in what must be
The closing of the daylight hours now broke.
Sweet nature governs what you and I now see
That orb, now gone, just a dim faint glow
Marks the end of today and what may be.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Watching the sunset over Rhossili Bay on the Gower peninsular in Wales
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 19 April 2013

The imagery of the sun is remarkably set, it reminds me of Keats description of the sun-god: His palace bright, Bastion'd with pyramids of glowing gold, And touch'd with shade of bronzed obelisks, Glar'd a blood-red through all its thousand courts, Arches, and domes, and fiery galleries; And all its curtains of Aurorian clouds....

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Lyn Pendleton 18 April 2013

Hi David, as much as I admire sunsets I tend to ignore the sun when possible.I sometimes have a strange phobia it will blow up the more I think about it, pay attention to it. HennyPenny syndrome or something. A wonderful write. I wish I could pick subjects so available. take care

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Kelvin Owusu 18 April 2013

Agreed with valerie this is a beautiful description of the sun truly a positive vibe nicely done

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Valerie Dohren 16 April 2013

A beautiful description of sunset David, very inspired.

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Xxxxxx Xxxxxxxxx 15 April 2013

A beautiful nature piece capturing a serene moment that so many of us take for granted. Very uplifting and so well written. Thanks for sharing.

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Heather Wilkins 05 September 2013

a beautiful description of nature and its wonders

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Juan Olivarez 26 April 2013

Beautifully descriptive poem. Very nice.

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Amir Aizat 24 April 2013

beautiful scenery nicely put into words. beautiful poem. :)

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Walterrean Salley 22 April 2013

I can see it. What a beautiful sunset. And thanks for sharing such a lovely scene with us.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 21 April 2013

The lovely sun set is mirrored in your beautiful poem with rhyme and rhythm. Enjoyed it, David!

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