The sun setting
The man in a haste.
But his pace slow.
Old age is like sunset. Though man is in haste yet his pace is slow. A beautiful philosophical poem executed concisely. Thank you dear Akham for sharing this poem.10
Everything slows then stops we are no different? .......well penned Akham
An excellent three liner! Pragmatic expression.......10
Taste of life! Man in a haste! ! Not to waste time; With the paste of the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
the sunset is a must as much as is its rising somewhere else all is cyclic
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Akham, such a marvelous poem.....10+++++++++++++