words swarm drizzling rhymes,
chores screaming to mind,
kids roam - shouting more! ! !
O what shall I do for my passion?
Surrender all...........
21st of November,2009
do more...write more... let the shout of kids be your inspiration to write... Let their noise, sounds like poetic words.... surrender all...to your passion....pour out everything.... wonderful write.... 10++++ Lovelots, Maia
It gets to this point I know and what a good solution for now. Keep up the drizzling rhymes as they always seem to drizzle in just the right place for the reader. 10 love Karin
happens to all of us...but sacrifice makes the poem sweeter and soulful, doesn't it? ...nice expression
Oh no! Don't give in, let it go piece by piece to the kids until their stomach are bloated. Another wonderful short piece coming from a woman who is one step beyond.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You can give in at times but never give up 10 Daniel