Surrender? Poem by Catrina Heart


Rating: 5.0

words swarm drizzling rhymes,
chores screaming to mind,
kids roam - shouting more! ! !
O what shall I do for my passion?

Surrender all...........

21st of November,2009

Daniel Kempson 21 November 2009

You can give in at times but never give up 10 Daniel

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Eyan Desir 21 November 2009

Another piece to ponder on

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Miriam Maia Padua 03 December 2009

do more...write more... let the shout of kids be your inspiration to write... Let their noise, sounds like poetic words.... surrender your passion....pour out everything.... wonderful write.... 10++++ Lovelots, Maia

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Vijay Gupta 01 December 2009

poem is good but not clear to me.plz clear it for me...

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It gets to this point I know and what a good solution for now. Keep up the drizzling rhymes as they always seem to drizzle in just the right place for the reader. 10 love Karin

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Nalini Hebbar 28 November 2009

happens to all of us...but sacrifice makes the poem sweeter and soulful, doesn't it? ...nice expression

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Noel Horlanda 23 November 2009

Oh no! Don't give in, let it go piece by piece to the kids until their stomach are bloated. Another wonderful short piece coming from a woman who is one step beyond.

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