Catrina Heart

Twilight Sky - Poem by Catrina Heart

Stars in the candle light, dined
Swallowed fires on solitary twilight sky
My eyes asked and dreamt
Under the smoke of star studded night
What happened to those times?
Those moments written on the sand?
Was it turned to ash and joined the dust?
Was it washed away by the kiss of distrust?
Wasted dew drops evaporated on the garden
Of never, O never, never land

3rd Of December,2009

Comments about Twilight Sky by Catrina Heart

  • (12/15/2009 2:01:00 PM)

    You convey the feeling of pain so eloquently, the same feeling which echoes in my heart. The last line is so moving. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/9/2009 5:06:00 AM)

    A candlelight piece in twilight, distrust in never land a sad tale by an expert
    story teller...very appealing write I can feel it+++++10
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  • Prashant Shaurya (12/9/2009 12:08:00 AM)

    indeed very touching..
    you write with an effect..
    the words create a brilliant picture..
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  • (12/4/2009 12:52:00 AM)

    the unreachable star...glitters in sky to be adored...a metaphor in poetic cogitations...a brilliant piece written....10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/3/2009 1:51:00 PM)

    This lady is a genius! !
    Excellent poetic line
    A fine piece to ponder on.....
    When you publish your book
    Please give me one.....
    Keep it up C.T...
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  • Ramesh T A (12/3/2009 9:03:00 AM)

    A feeling unbearable reveals itself in verse touching the readers! (Report) Reply

  • Miriam Maia Padua (12/3/2009 7:22:00 AM)

    glittering like the stars in the sky...
    glistening under the smoke of the star studded night
    you write with great impact.....
    sad but still it glistened with beauty
    touching.....really touching....
    my friend, you have that silent river touch...(smile)


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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 3, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 17, 2009

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