By the glowing eels in the sea
Barracuda swam across the reefs
Unthreatened from the water squall
Unspoiled from withdrawn zeal and ardor
Serene by the tides appealing offer
Constant he to school proverbs –
Still numerous to lure for a sweet angel!
enigmatic...your poem and the barracuda both...an affair deep (taking place beneath sea) well told...10
Beautifully descriptive writing Catrina and with a commendable theme. Loved it! 10 Karin
Barracuda swam across the reefs Unthreatened from the water squall Unspoiled from withdrawn zeal and ardor Serene by the tides appealing offer.....lovely poem and it is beautiful to swim across unthreatened.....i loved the theme....10
this is good.. can i be the ell? i always wanted to 'shine my light'
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The wording is so wonderful Nice poetic piece....