Survival 101 Poem by Jacqui Broad

Survival 101



Swimming, deep waters.
Afraid of the unknown, so
let's drown in this sea...?

Friday, October 28, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: sea,swimming
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 04 November 2011

Yup! Silly human rats runs for everything at gets nothing comes back with weather-beaten face bro-beaten by fate. Yes future is uncertain and present is always not clear as these are the days mist. Hey u said 3 lines that is your art to make you these may word that shows your elegantine style. Great Broad! Great Board! I will ask the lord to tell a word of congratulations. he! he! he! :) :) :)

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Dave Walker 29 October 2011

Wow very strong and powerful, a great write.

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Eric Cockrell 28 October 2011

all the way, or not at all!

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Vipins Puthooran 28 October 2011

This's excellent write, , Meaningful/thought-provoking! ! If we can swim in deep water of love, our soul'll drown in its blue water, , don't fear! We'll have a spirit inside to swim again and again! ! An excellent poem! ! !

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Melancholy Man 28 October 2011

Fantastically thought provoking. Not sure I've ever seen a question mark add so much to a poem! ! Great writing.

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