Survival 101 Poem by Jacqui Broad

Survival 101



Swimming, deep waters.
Afraid of the unknown, so
let's drown in this sea...?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 04 November 2011

Yup! Silly human rats runs for everything at gets nothing comes back with weather-beaten face bro-beaten by fate. Yes future is uncertain and present is always not clear as these are the days mist. Hey u said 3 lines that is your art to make you these may word that shows your elegantine style. Great Broad! Great Board! I will ask the lord to tell a word of congratulations. he! he! he! :) :) :)

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Dave Walker 29 October 2011

Wow very strong and powerful, a great write.

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Eric Cockrell 28 October 2011

all the way, or not at all!

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Vipins Puthooran 28 October 2011

This's excellent write, , Meaningful/thought-provoking! ! If we can swim in deep water of love, our soul'll drown in its blue water, , don't fear! We'll have a spirit inside to swim again and again! ! An excellent poem! ! !

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Melancholy Man 28 October 2011

Fantastically thought provoking. Not sure I've ever seen a question mark add so much to a poem! ! Great writing.

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