Survival Instincts Poem by Jaishree Nair

Survival Instincts

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Wiping her hands on the apron
Went to answer a call front..
There on the step stood,
a toddler whimpering
with hands outtstretched..

wondering if he was alone
Saw a woman entering the gate
With a shabby knapsack on her back
Looking haggard...and starved...

The constraints of life
etched on her young face
A stoop to proclaim her battle with life
eyes reflected her inner turmoils...

The pathetic sight touched a sensitive chord........
Went inside to fetch her purse
Intending to wipe away their tears for a moment...
but dismayed to find them gone...

Not a trace to claim their presence
Just imagination...? she wondered...
Her eyes registered confusion...
Searched the whereabouts for tell tale signs...

Realisation dawned slowly...
A few bronze utensils laid out for polishing
Were missing....confirming their visit

She was left pondering...
Who was to blame?
Herself for the bait of temptations to lure the impoverished,
Or the unexpected visitors for their survival instincts
While suffocating in life's ordeal.

A thought troubling...

Tuesday, December 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: confusion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 10 February 2016

You, dear Lady, can transform evryscenr to a alovely poerical point of you.

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Kelly Kurt 29 December 2015

A very honest, open minded look at the situation. There are always at least two sides to a story. Well written. Thank you, Jaishree

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 29 December 2015

a very beautiful description of an episode....I rememember a Hindi song naqli chehra samne aaye asli Surat chupi Rehe here the same thing follows and the woman remains in dilemma whom to blame? herself or the visitor.....she felt deeply concerned for the visitors...she made efforts to help them...but she was frauded by their condition.... their is one more thing to it....perhaps the visitor was compelled to do because he has no other option....this makes sense in a way that for belly one can do anything...very nicely composed lines...thanks for sharing

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