Susan Poem by Bill Cantrell

Susan

Rating: 5.0

An echo of light,
which equates to light's soul?
Or the negative of life,
immune to the cold?

An eclipse of a pen,
tracing thoughts in a poem,
hiking under each line,
for a permanent home?

Every dream has its shadow,
which awakening erases
Then washed in times steam,
slowly wipes out all traces

How many hearts might your shadows touch,
as they reach out carefully, deep below every line?
Silent as death, they would love to speak out
Yet their lot in this life amounts to that of a mime

And so the consensus of the majority concedes,
it cannot be defined, just a ghost in the breeze
I highly object, inspiration agrees,
from the heat of life's pen, we seek shade from the trees

Friday, May 24, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: inspiration
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A friend
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 May 2024

I love it I hope she love it TFS

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M. Asim Nehal 25 May 2024

A very dear friend, she was hospitalized in Sep 2023 and recovered well for past 6-7 months she is not active on this site, hope she is recovering and will start writing again. A nice tribute to our friend Susan.

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Rebecca Navarre 24 May 2024

Ever such beautiful heart and sentiment, that touches the heart of the reader! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 24 May 2024

Wow! .. A Beautifully heart touching tribute to your friend! ..

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