An echo of light,
which equates to light's soul?
Or the negative of life,
immune to the cold?
An eclipse of a pen,
tracing thoughts in a poem,
hiking under each line,
for a permanent home?
Every dream has its shadow,
which awakening erases
Then washed in times steam,
slowly wipes out all traces
How many hearts might your shadows touch,
as they reach out carefully, deep below every line?
Silent as death, they would love to speak out
Yet their lot in this life amounts to that of a mime
And so the consensus of the majority concedes,
it cannot be defined, just a ghost in the breeze
I highly object, inspiration agrees,
from the heat of life's pen, we seek shade from the trees
A very dear friend, she was hospitalized in Sep 2023 and recovered well for past 6-7 months she is not active on this site, hope she is recovering and will start writing again. A nice tribute to our friend Susan.
Ever such beautiful heart and sentiment, that touches the heart of the reader! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++
Wow! .. A Beautifully heart touching tribute to your friend! ..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love it I hope she love it TFS