Swan Pool Poem by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

Swan Pool

Rating: 5.0


At Swan Pool so still
Where the water does glisten,
And shines in the sunlight
An artist's display,
And where dreams are made by
The softest reflections,
Which lie on the surface
And mirror this day.

While there on the bank side
So quiet and peaceful,
I sit and I wonder
As time passes by,
Just watching the swans as
They gracefully sail from,
The reeds on the shoreline
Where shadows do lie.

For sweet is the morning
So pleasantly drifting,
With no need to hurry
And no rush to end,
This time is my own and
This time I will treasure,
The love of a lifetime
I've found here a friend.

As smoke clouds are drifting
Across the horizon,
And making new pictures
On canvas of blue,
And as I look over
The water that glistens,
And sparkles like diamonds
I'm lost in this view.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 15 September 2011

Superb write..another great love of Nature outcome from yours.Spectacular.

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Ernestine Northover 29 May 2008

Uummmmmmmmmmhhhhh! ! ! ! ! ! ! Delightful and such wonderful imagery, it frames a marvellous picture. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 27 May 2008

You have expressed your feeings well in this one, dreamlike quality about it Love duncan X

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Abha Sharma 25 May 2008

Like your other poems this one is also full of nature imagery which is very soothing..the lines reveal contentment, joy and peaceful state of heart, swans are symbol of peace and immortality, I too got engrossed in the beauty of your poem while reading… Abha

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Thad Wilk 25 May 2008

I got lost in this view too, just reading the beauty of it, in this poem so sublime! ! Great read Andrew! ! Best regards, Friend Thad *10*! !

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