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Sweet Lullaby

Rating: 3.7
I wake up from deep slumber
To little hands caressing
My cheeks, I peer, half open
Eyes which he shuts with his
little fingers, kisses my cheeks
Noisily and says 'Hush Mommy'
'Go back to sleep'.

(This poem is dedicated to my son 4 and half years old
who is sometimes mothers me.)
Taufeeq Yahiya 29 October 2008
nice work.4,5,6, & 7th lines seems like a long sentence. i guess u have to work it over and try to break it poetically. god bless
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Evaughn Gray 27 October 2008
it's short but it's so sweet and caring i loved it truly it was an amazing little piece! ~Hazel G.E
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Brianna Wilshusen 23 October 2008
I love it, its sweet and it reminds me a lot of my cousin who is 2 he stays with me a lot. It shows little kids affection towards his mother and I aprove.10
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Kesav Easwaran 20 October 2008
a lullaby in return...good piece 10
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Asif Andalib 20 October 2008
It's like one of the greatest paintings on Mother and Child. You have described it so beautifully in so few words. I love it.10 from me.
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David Threadgold 20 October 2008
A very sentimental moment shared with a child is worth more than money itself. very well written and a pleasure to read.10/10 Regards Dave T
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Vidyadhar Durgekar 14 October 2008
Sweet lullaboy seems to be really sweet to be an inspiration for writing poems
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