Sweet Lullaby Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Sweet Lullaby

Rating: 3.7

I wake up from deep slumber
To little hands caressing
My cheeks, I peer, half open
Eyes which he shuts with his
little fingers, kisses my cheeks
Noisily and says 'Hush Mommy'
'Go back to sleep'.

(This poem is dedicated to my son 4 and half years old
who is sometimes mothers me.)

Vidyadhar Durgekar 14 October 2008

Sweet lullaboy seems to be really sweet to be an inspiration for writing poems

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David Threadgold 20 October 2008

A very sentimental moment shared with a child is worth more than money itself. very well written and a pleasure to read.10/10 Regards Dave T

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Taufeeq Yahiya 29 October 2008

nice work.4,5,6, & 7th lines seems like a long sentence. i guess u have to work it over and try to break it poetically. god bless

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Evaughn Gray 27 October 2008

it's short but it's so sweet and caring i loved it truly it was an amazing little piece! ~Hazel G.E

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Brianna Wilshusen 23 October 2008

I love it, its sweet and it reminds me a lot of my cousin who is 2 he stays with me a lot. It shows little kids affection towards his mother and I aprove.10

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Kesav Easwaran 20 October 2008

a lullaby in return...good piece 10

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Asif Andalib 20 October 2008

It's like one of the greatest paintings on Mother and Child. You have described it so beautifully in so few words. I love it.10 from me.

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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