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Take Our Snow Please

Rating: 3.9
As out the window,
I look, more snow today,
have only one thing to say,
take our snow please.

Six week-ends straight,
snow, snow every where,
have only one thing to say,
take our snow please, today.
So much snow, so much cold,
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M Asim Nehal 26 January 2016
This snow is very much required at dry place on earth....nice poem.
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Manonton Dalan 26 January 2016
jim never submitted any poem for last ten years what could have happen to him? ? ?
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Manonton Dalan 26 January 2016
send all your snow to California please
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Manonton Dalan 26 January 2016
send those snow down here...ehhhehehhehe
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Kim Barney 26 January 2016
Congrats on poem of the day for this one, and would you please come and take all of my snow, too?
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Mannika S Raghav 26 January 2016
nice and simple. lovely. the only (of the three) poem i understood today.
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Jasbir Chatterjee 26 January 2016
Congrats on being poet of the day, Jim! I read this poem and your Thanks, Rain. Your life seems to be so much like mine here in Delhi, which has a climate of extremes. When it rains, it rains like hell; in summer, it becomes hot like a furnace and hot air, which we call loo, blows outside. In winter, though it doesn't snow, it becomes really cold; this year was an exception; cold weather set in only after 7 Jan.16.
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Rajnish Manga 26 January 2016
Fantastic portrayal of typical weather conditions of India's capital New Delhi, Jasbir ji.
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John Richter 26 January 2016
Rain, rain, go away! Come again another day! Delightful poem about snow...
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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 January 2016
An awesome imagery depicting the condition of every human in the place that had a snowfall for a prolonged time and the snow appears as omnipresent and praying the nature/ God to end the winter and snowfall. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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Ernestine Northover 28 January 2007
Hey! I liked this one enormously. Great read and I loved the subject. I 'snow' what you mean, not that we get as much as you do I presume. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
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