Take Our Snow Please Poem by jim foulk

Take Our Snow Please

Rating: 3.9


As out the window,
I look, more snow today,
have only one thing to say,
take our snow please.

Six week-ends straight,
snow, snow every where,
have only one thing to say,
take our snow please, today.

So much snow, so much cold,
snow in the streets, snow in the yard,
snow on the car, snow on my shoe,
have only one thing to say,
take our snow please, we don't know what to do.

Winter, oh winter please end,
all of this snow, we don't really want it,
snow falling, flakes dropping
have only one thing to say,
take our snow please, don't delay.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 28 January 2007

Hey! I liked this one enormously. Great read and I loved the subject. I 'snow' what you mean, not that we get as much as you do I presume. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 27 January 2007

Jim>>>The most awesome quality surrounding Poetic verse, is flavour & choice... I can't imagine, anygood conniseur of contemporary or traditional literature, finding the works of bothDickenson, and Poe, as being mundane...yet 2 of my fwellow poets on board here, think just that.Does that make these 2 classic poets feckless and boresome? Of course not.Your Cchoice to utelize refrained vesage, in this work, in my opinion...works. Ialso found the general construction of your work to be of commendable quality, as well as your funly topic of YOUR rightful choice... ~ F. j. R. ~

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Jasbir Chatterjee 26 January 2016

Congrats on being poet of the day, Jim! I read this poem and your Thanks, Rain. Your life seems to be so much like mine here in Delhi, which has a climate of extremes. When it rains, it rains like hell; in summer, it becomes hot like a furnace and hot air, which we call loo, blows outside. In winter, though it doesn't snow, it becomes really cold; this year was an exception; cold weather set in only after 7 Jan.16.

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Rajnish Manga 26 January 2016

Fantastic portrayal of typical weather conditions of India's capital New Delhi, Jasbir ji.

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Mannika S Raghav 26 January 2016

nice and simple. lovely. the only (of the three) poem i understood today.

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M Asim Nehal 26 January 2016

This snow is very much required at dry place on earth....nice poem.

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Manonton Dalan 26 January 2016

jim never submitted any poem for last ten years what could have happen to him? ? ?

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Manonton Dalan 26 January 2016

send all your snow to California please

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Manonton Dalan 26 January 2016

send those snow down here...ehhhehehhehe

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Kim Barney 26 January 2016

Congrats on poem of the day for this one, and would you please come and take all of my snow, too?

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