Tanka - Lifeless Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka - Lifeless

Rating: 5.0


and this outside world,
is churning and whirling news
all of destruction,
how can i sit back and sip,
hot cup of cappuccino

Wednesday, July 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,news
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 20 July 2016

Wonderful Tanka Asim. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 October 2016

Yes we cannot keep silence, we are not lifeless, it's a question of survival of millions of innocent people of this area.

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Susan Williams 23 July 2016

The opposition of two states of being is alarming- -and it is how we all live today from bad news to bad news while trying to have a small oasis wherein we could find rest and peace- -but we cannot. This is a 10, my friend

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 July 2016

The wickedness of mankind! Seen all over the world. Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 20 July 2016

Nicely penned poem. putting across a paradoxical situation- having a 'hot cup of cappuccino, unfazed by the news of destruction all around. Wonderful imagery. Thanks, Asim ji.

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Kelly Kurt 20 July 2016

I often feel the same way, my friend

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