Tanka - Selfishness Prevails Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka - Selfishness Prevails

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birds sing in harmony
melodies of pure freedom
untouched by the world
but man's selfishness prevails
silencing their joyful songs.

Wednesday, April 3, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,freedom,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 03 April 2024

Magnificent piece..... thank u..... friend.......

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Sheeya Hacks 03 April 2024

Excellent tanka, I am learning about this format. I shall try one now.

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Deepak S S 04 April 2024

Yes, all prevails in this real world which is full of crooks.

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Rob Lamberton 03 April 2024

In all of nature nothing is as selfish as the human heart!

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Juhaina Tumlu 03 April 2024

It does prevail.....Good write.

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Sandra Feldman 03 April 2024

So true, so true. Beautifully written truth, as only great poetry is able to share.Wonderful and unforgettable

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 03 April 2024

Bravo Asim for this wonderful tanka

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