Tanka - Unconcered Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka - Unconcered

Rating: 5.0

unconcerned
the world keeps going on,
yet her pain is deep...
her tears tell a story of
unspeakable betrayals

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 05 April 2024

Last line is the highlight.. invokes concern for this earth and world...excellent write Asim..liked

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 26 March 2024

Wonderful Asim TFS

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 March 2024

Unconcerned or indifferent? Whatever, most tragic, the pain and the tears, a tragic Tanka, Dr. M. Asim Nehal Sir! 5*****

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Nabakishore Dash 25 March 2024

Very nice tanka.

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